When characters call

Caitlin.
Clancy Farquhar.
Lady Emeralda Smart.
Cirencester Bloom.
Walpole E. Epstein.
Lycralad.
Reg the Vampire.
Gerald.
Wendy Windways.
Agnes Ontario.

And others…

Ten different characters, each with a totally different story. Some crossover, and appear in another’s story; some appear only once, never to be seen again. And some simply provide their name, never to return…

But, when I write about these characters, I have to wonder who it is that is steering their tale.

I have a feeling that it’s the characters themselves. They come to life when I write about them, and stop me in my tracks if I want them to do something they don’t want to do, or simply just wouldn’t do.

“I’m not like that”, they’d say, or something similar.

I’d like them to walk down a hill – they end up racing along a river in a speedboat.

I want them to silently watch on – they don’t – I think, can’t – stay silent.

I have an idea for a story… they have other ideas.

Characters.

Should they be free, or simply be puppets?

I’d prefer freedom myself.

If I was a character.

Diner

The car stalled at the bottom of the hill. Adam turned the key several times, but it wouldn’t start.

He locked the car securely, and set off up the hill towards where he’d seen the bright neon diner sign from the main road several minutes earlier, hoping to use their phone.

Torrential rain pushed him back, but eventually he reached the trailer at the top.

He noticed the green sign on the door: closed.

***

Flash in the Pan time again, this time the flash word is Diner, and the word limit is 75. I’m one word short yet again this time; 74 words have been used.

To the end of the world

Many years ago, the Earth was flat. She was slim, and floated in a vast ocean. A large mountain marked the centre of the Earth, which was many miles high. Around the mountain, there were four continents, Europe, Asia, Africa, and a fourth one, which at the time hadn’t been discovered by anybody from the other three continents; so hadn’t been named.

The Earth’s inhabitants were wary of travelling too far around this amazingly green and blue landmass, for fear of reaching the end of the world. The thought that many folk shared at the time that people, once they reached the end of the world, would simply fall off, was ridiculed by all of the elders and tribesmen and other great leaders of the day. They knew that whoever reached the end of the world would fall in.

Into the great ocean that surrounded everything.

They’d be lost forever should that happen.

The Sun shone in the sky during the day, and the Moon arrived in his place during the night, as they both revolved around the great mountain. Sometimes, the Sun and the Moon got their timings wrong, and appeared in the skies at the same time, which created cause for both great celebration and panic. Usually by the same people, as they knew the Sun brought new life, and the Moon brought calmness. How could they celebrate new life with a great party when the Moon was advising them to be restful and calm?

They partied anyway, but always rued the fact that they had, as the great mountain showed his displeasure by bringing rains, and strong winds… and on occasions thunderous storms with ferocious bolts of lightning were sent down upon the Earth; all because the people didn’t know what to do.

One such person decided to investigate the elders’ claims that if he reached the end of the world he’d fall in, rather than falling off. He thought he’d be careful, and when he reached the edge of the world, he would tie himself onto something. He packed some lengths of vine into a skin, and set off, on foot to find the end of the world. He wouldn’t fall off or in… he just knew it.

For days he walked.

Days turned into nights, as the flat disc continued in its revolutions around the great mountain. He partied with himself and the Sun, and rested with the Moon. When both appeared, he partied inwardly, whilst pretending to rest. He put up with the storms, and the winds, although he wondered how the great mountain could know what he was thinking.

Days turned into weeks… weeks into months… months into years, or so it felt… and yet he still walked. Ever onwards.

He passed through many villages, and told the village elders of his epic journey. The elders, like all of the others before him, ridiculed him. Of course you will fall in, they scoffed, thinking he was out of earshot.

He knew what they were thinking if they said nothing.

One day, in the warm sunshine, he became weary, and needed to rest. The Moon wasn’t visible up in the skies, but he knew that he couldn’t go on. Fearing the wrath of the great mountain, he settled down beneath a large oak tree, and slept.

The Moon was in the skies when he awoke. He opened his eyes, and instantly saw a familiar face. A friend from his own village, and surrounding them, all of the other villagers with whom he’s partied several years before.

“Am I dreaming?” asked the traveller, still weary.

“No” said his friend. “We saw you walking from the direction of the great mountain. We gathered together, in readiness to throw a huge party upon your return. We waited for you to tell us all about the end of the world, and what the great ocean is like.”

“We wanted to know if you fell in…” came a voice from one of the elders standing at the back of the crowd.

“If I’m not dreaming,” said the traveller, “then what are you all doing here? And how did you get here before me?”

“We haven’t travelled anywhere” his friend said again. “You’ve returned to us.”

“Returned?” The traveller was now even more confused. “I haven’t even reached the end of the world yet…”.

Sideview’s weekend theme this week is ‘The end of the world’. I wanted to write about how it would feel to be at the edge of a whole new paradigm. A completely new way of thinking isn’t exactly end of the world stuff per se, but when you move forth into a new way of thinking, and leave the old ways behind, that old way, and that old world, has come to an end.

Changing times are exciting times… it isn’t always bad at the end of the world.

Wine

The red wine was warm, sweet and sickly.

Not to his taste at all, although he pretended to enjoy it. He smiled at his companion after taking another sip. He liked this part of the chase; the teasing. He knew he would be quenching his real thirst very shortly.

This is my first attempt at writing a piece of flash fiction for Red’s Flash in the Pan challenge. The limit for this particular challenge, Wine, is fifty words. I just about made it with 49.

Strange Things

Jean cautiously approached Athena, who was cradling the baby tenderly.

“Could I have my child back, please?” Jean didn’t mean to sound as abrupt as she did. Athena stood, and reluctantly handed the gurgling bundle over.

“He’s a lovely baby.” Athena said, “Maybe I was wrong about him.”

Jean was confused. How could anyone be wrong about a baby? What could Gerald have done to make this strangely clad and very tall woman think she was wrong about him? She dismissed the thought. She didn’t want to know.

Jean was also confused as to how they’d managed to end up in the middle of a field, in the pouring rain, in the middle of the night. Were they on a film set? Jean wondered, as she looked around at the two chariots, goodness knows how many horses, and umpteen people dressed like ancient …Romans? No; she noticed there weren’t any cameras. And she wondered why she would actually be on a movie set as she wasn’t an actress. She had to be dreaming.

Too much strangeness around.

“Could somebody please take us home?” She asked nobody in particular, and still quite abruptly. She was cold, wet and tired. Too cold, wet and tired for it to be a dream.

Zeus walked over from his chariot, and spoke gently to Jean. “Yes, child, I will ensure you get home, at the correct time, on the correct date, and with everything as it should be.”

Jean, once again, was confused. What a strange thing to say, she thought. What a strange night.

This is another part of my Legendary Circles storyline, which is currently going through a very confused stage. The previous part can be found by clicking here. There are many other parts to this tale, and they can be found, along with other multi-parters, in my Storylines menu. This link will take you there.

The Reason

You may have noticed that for the last week or so, I’ve been posting the occasional one-hundred word post, which kind of tell a tale of sorts. This post is slightly longer than a hundred words (actually, it’s considerably longer); and you may have read one or two posts that were shorter or longer by a word (this was due to discrepancies between Live Writer and WordPress word counts. I just went with them; I’m not going to squabble over one word.)

The posts are parts of the story of my life, actually. Various things I’ve come across throughout my existence this time around.

And now, here’s the reason for all of the posts.

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Existence

The room was quiet. The lighting was good; the TV off.

Papers needed to be sorted… older ones destroyed, newer ones filed.

That was where the problem was. The filing.

Not my filing; THE filing.

The music system, unplugged, powered up. White noise, increasing in volume, filled the room. If I wasn’t mistaken, I could see the volume button turning… but that HAD to be my imagination… buttons can’t turn on their own, not even when sitting on the remote control.

Not mine, anyway. And I wasn’t sitting on it.

I left the filing.

I left the room in fact.