One Minute Ramble: Within

Posted on August 17, 2012 by Tom Merriman

Within me, there is life
Within the life, there is light
Within the light, there is warmth
Within the warmth, there is calm
Within the calm, there is space
Within the space, there is time
Within the time, there is hope
Within the hope, there is peace
Within the peace, there is me
And within the me, there is…

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23 thoughts on “One Minute Ramble: Within”

Let's CUT the Crap! on August 17, 2012 at 9:09 pm said:

May peace stay with you.
- Tom (Aquatom1968) on August 18, 2012 at 10:03 am said:
  
  Thank you Tess.
Diane Henders on August 17, 2012 at 9:23 pm said:

Absolutely love this!
- Tom (Aquatom1968) on August 18, 2012 at 10:03 am said:
  
  Thanks, Diane… glad you do!
kateshrewsday on August 17, 2012 at 9:50 pm said:

Lovely. Wish I felt like that.
- Tom (Aquatom1968) on August 18, 2012 at 10:04 am said:
  
  Thanks, Kate. Everything starts within…
Alannah Murphy on August 17, 2012 at 10:48 pm said:

I cannot tell you how much I like that, and how nice your blog looks, so colourful, lovely!
- Tom (Aquatom1968) on August 18, 2012 at 10:06 am said:
  
  Thank you Alannah. I do enjoy playing with the themes!
prenin on August 17, 2012 at 11:17 pm said:

Love it!

God Bless!

Prenin.
- Tom (Aquatom1968) on August 18, 2012 at 10:06 am said:
  
  Thanks, Prenin!
Andra Watkins on August 18, 2012 at 5:03 am said:

Tom, I always love how beautiful you make your words.
- Tom (Aquatom1968) on August 18, 2012 at 10:08 am said:
  
  Thank you, Andra. The idea for the heart was actually an after-thought…
lameadventures on August 18, 2012 at 11:06 pm said:

Yes, Tom, that’s a very lovely ramble, and I’m glad you concluded with the elipses and didn’t muck it up at the end by adding “fish and chips” as the final three words.
- Tom (Aquatom1968) on August 19, 2012 at 10:53 am said:
  
  Thanks, LA, but you’re actually right as well… there was fish and chips within me when I wrote that! Uncanny!
  - lameadventures on August 19, 2012 at 4:22 pm said:
    
    My powers of perception even amaze me right now Tom.
    - Tom (Aquatom1968) on August 19, 2012 at 5:49 pm said:
      
      Your powers are a gift!
      - lameadventures on August 19, 2012 at 5:53 pm said:
        
        Awwwwwwwwwww, you bring them to the surface Tom like cream and other floaty things that will remain unmentioned on your polite site.
        
        Tom (Aquatom1968) on August 19, 2012 at 6:06 pm said:
        
        I misread polite site for police state which completely altered the context of your comment, LA. I’ve got the correct version now however! Remember – use your powers wisely!
        
        lameadventures on August 19, 2012 at 6:13 pm said:
        
        “Police state”! Love it!
shreejacob on August 19, 2012 at 12:05 pm said:

Lovely
- Tom (Aquatom1968) on August 19, 2012 at 12:26 pm said:
  
  Thanks, Shree.
Sue Dreamwalker on August 19, 2012 at 2:06 pm said:

That was very profound Tom.. excellent short poem with a whole lot of meaning.. Sue x
- Tom (Aquatom1968) on August 19, 2012 at 5:51 pm said:
  
  Thanks, Sue.

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